A 'PLAN' for excellent writing..... !

Topic: The Development of the Internet
Purpose: To share what I have found out about the history and technology, about the Internet
Audience: www/ somebody wanting to find out about the history of the internet

Who Invented The Internet.

- When was it ‘’CREATED”
a.The Internet was made on May 31st in 1961
-When was created the Internet?
a.The Internet was invented or created by, Leonard Kleinrock

-Why did their invention come about?
a.The network group had a meeting talking about how the Internet should of been more exclusive. They also were thinking how to make people commnicate with each-other across the globe also. So Internet was one of the ideas

-What did the Internet first look like?
a.The Internet was only a small piece of network and it was called IMP.. It was very fancy towards now-a-days.
Actually the first message that was sent was on Friday October 29, 1969 at Ten Thirty at night. It was sent from the person that invented it (Leonard Kleinrock) .

-What do you think the world would be like if it was invented:
a. I think the world would be different, because the internet helped people around the world communicate with others.

-What did the Internet look like NOW-A-DAYS....
a.The Internet now-a-days is completely fun, there are things like FACEBOOK , BEBO, TWITTER, YOUTUBE.. And many more other websites that people also love!

Put All Of This Into A Story:
The Internet was first created on May 31st 1961, and the person that did invent the INTERNET is called “Leonard Kleinrock”.

When he thought about making the Internet exclusive he had a meeting with the NETWORK COMPANY, about how they were going to make it so that everybody could communicate around the world with others, so the Internet was an idea for the future...

The Internet in the first place was a small device also known as IMP, but the first message on the Internet was sent on Friday October the 29th, in the year 1969. It was sent from the creator LEONARD KLEINROCK..

I reckon if the ‘Internet’ wasn’t invented , the world would be completely different, because the INTERNET helped people around the world communicate and connect with each-other.
The Internet in our day’s is completely fun, because they have made things like FACE-BOOK, BEBO, TWITTER, YOUTUBE and many more other things that people ‘Love and Enjoy’.
!!!!SO THANK_YOU TO LEONARD KLEINROCK!!!!

Discovery about Robot's!!!

Notes millions of robots around the clock they re-defined, and more constructive they carry out task of accuracy and consistiancy. diffacult to define freed people through out monotonous danger unpleasent	Text Reconstruction: in the world, million’s of robot’s are around the clock, now-a-days they are re-defined, and more constructive. they carry out task of accuracy and consistiancy , they have also freed people through-out the universe, even if it with monotonous danger, and un-plesant things in the situation.
Notes hundreds of robots are being formed today human like action figure. :P walk balance and can response faces robots are here to stay new develop-ments all the time truly intelligent robotic study’s are early stages	Text Reconstruction: hundreds of robots are still being formed and there are new developments happening all the time. Robots are human like figures they can walk,balance and they are truly intelligent. One thing we know for sure is that robots are here to stay.

Science Road Show , at Tamaki College..

Tamaki College was having a Science Road Show!

And to tell you the truth it was so interesting and amazing.

My favourite object in that area was the Piano that you could step on.

But here's the thing when you step on the BIG piano it makes noises I was honestly buzzing out, so as I was stepping on the piano I ended up doing my shuffle. It was completely funny. Tina and my cousin Tiana were laughing at me. Tiana was saying that I was a Clown. But thats just me WEIRD as! lol

My most favourite part of the Show was the 'FIERY FLAMES',

The manager of the company got all of these weird scientist stuff and put them together

causing it to flame up into HUGE FLAMES. It was totally wicked, I kept saying "OHHHHHH", because it was so awesome! I had wished that we could do experiments our-selfs but it didn't come true how sad.

At the end Room 20 had to leave and go back to our wonderful school, Point England.

I didn't want to leave that soon to be honest because I didn't try all of the things that were in there it was a bit devastating. But oh well ?

My Small Snippet, Highlight

As my lung’s were gasping for air, I couldn’t breathe because of the hotness that came from the bright beautiful sun yesterday. I looked in my bag to see if my Asthma Pump was in my bag, but it wasnt. I was trying to breathe as much as I could, but it really didn’t help.

As I was trying to keep up with all of the other fit girls, it honestly felt like I was going to die. I wanted to stop running but I didn’t give up! I kept running’ because I’m a true champion. NOT.
But when we stoped running I walked to my bottle of water as soon as I could, and drunk all of the water that was in the icey cold bottle.

The fitness test was over and done with, and I was completely tired but wait there was more, we still had to have a GAME! so as my poor innastant heart kept up with my running and things like that, I had to go on into GK which is Goal Keep,

Goal Keep is the pistion that keep’s the shooter from getting the goal in, I had never played that spot before, I had actually hoped that I could play in GD but my coach Bernie put me in as GK.
I think I played really bad in that spot. So I hoped off on the Second Quater and let the other girl’s play there number one sport, NETBALL

Geometry Translation''

Lately' Room 20 has been learning about "Geometry"..

It has been quite tricky for me though, but I reckon I could ace it.

Here is a example of what Geometry really is???

My example show's that the shape's are 1 across, and 1 down.

Geometry means, a lot of things in Mathematic's. Plus it also has a relationship in its point's.

But at this moment we have been learning about Translating and Translation..

Making It In The "AUCKLAND" Netball Team

"ARHHHHHHHHHH", I yelled as my dad told me I had made it in the Auckland Netball Team..
As I came home from, talking on the phone to my buddy 'Ala'. But when my dad told me that wonderful news I screamed and I think that I hurt 'Ala's' ear a bit.
She did ask me why I 'SCREAMED' and I told her, and to tell you this she said "CONGRATULATIONS", and I reaplied back ''Thank-You''.

Thank You to Mrs Langitupu

Thank You, Camp Tc
Mrs Langitupu


Thank You, so much for helping my group
and I with the music, the dance moves and other things like that.

I appreciate all the hard effort that you put into
our group!
you helped me and Feki and I get the group to listen to us for once!.

I would like to say another “HUGE” thank you to you for
making the concert a great one! without you
there would be no concert we all appreciate it.

Much Love From Shontelle Sue
xxxooo



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